A well organised and competent response. To strengthen:
1) On first slide explain the genre of the artist.
2) More of Goodwin, infact you could construct a slide referencing each aspect of Goodwin's theory of Music videos explaining how your music video either uses, develops or conforms to Goodwin's blueprint. I'd strongly advise this because you're response is light on theory.
3) Lighting, you haven't explained the use of ambient lighting and how this adds realism to your music video.
4) Re flashback, Google Wikipedia and look at the conventions. You can quote, I did send you an email re this. If you respond to a quote from Wikipedia this will tighten this interesting aspect of your response.
5) Print Productions: Panels 2 & 3 are not discussed.
6) Make more of how your music video challenges the conventional/traditional representation of love. You can upload images from paintings, or films, or other music videos. This is what is unique about your music video and you need to explain why you challenged the traditional representation.
You reference Bridget Jones Diary at the beginning of your slide show. This is not a particularly appropriate reference.
1) I suggest you take some screen shots from the link below for a clip of Cromer during the making of Steve Coogan's latest Alan Partridge movie shot in Cromer and on Cromer Pier.
2) You may want to quote from the comments about the iconic nature of Cromer.
3) You could also upload some screen shots or clips from this documentary. The link is below:
A well organised and competent response. To strengthen:
ReplyDelete1) On first slide explain the genre of the artist.
2) More of Goodwin, infact you could construct a slide referencing each aspect of Goodwin's theory of Music videos explaining how your music video either uses, develops or conforms to Goodwin's blueprint. I'd strongly advise this because you're response is light on theory.
3) Lighting, you haven't explained the use of ambient lighting and how this adds realism to your music video.
4) Re flashback, Google Wikipedia and look at the conventions. You can quote, I did send you an email re this. If you respond to a quote from Wikipedia this will tighten this interesting aspect of your response.
5) Print Productions: Panels 2 & 3 are not discussed.
6) Make more of how your music video challenges the conventional/traditional representation of love. You can upload images from paintings, or films, or other music videos. This is what is unique about your music video and you need to explain why you challenged the traditional representation.
You reference Bridget Jones Diary at the beginning of your slide show. This is not a particularly appropriate reference.
ReplyDelete1) I suggest you take some screen shots from the link below for a clip of Cromer during the making of Steve Coogan's latest Alan Partridge movie shot in Cromer and on Cromer Pier.
2) You may want to quote from the comments about the iconic nature of Cromer.
3) You could also upload some screen shots or clips from this documentary. The link is below:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uqt4Gwp8a94