You are making excellent progress Tim. It would be a good idea to get class feedback on your ideas, particularly whether to go with colour or back and white.
I like the colour versions for your front cover in your previous post, though the black and white stark style in this most recent post is impressive. Lose the superimposted image of Billie off Panel 1, a good idea to experiment but I don't think it works. You could instead superimpose the image of Billie(ghostly transparent) over the seaside impage in Panels 2 & 3.
Panels 2 & 3 are a nice idea but have you any other images that could be stretched, for example a profile of the 2 performers looking at eachother going up and down an escalator, for example one of the girls going up on Panel 2 and the other going down on Panel 3!!!
Panel 4 works nicely though I suggest including minimal colour tinting would add dimension and visual appeal The font for the graphics maybe a little large.
You are making excellent progress Tim. It would be a good idea to get class feedback on your ideas, particularly whether to go with colour or back and white.
ReplyDeleteI like the colour versions for your front cover in your previous post, though the black and white stark style in this most recent post is impressive. Lose the superimposted image of Billie off Panel 1, a good idea to experiment but I don't think it works. You could instead superimpose the image of Billie(ghostly transparent) over the seaside impage in Panels 2 & 3.
Panels 2 & 3 are a nice idea but have you any other images that could be stretched, for example a profile of the 2 performers looking at eachother going up and down an escalator, for example one of the girls going up on Panel 2 and the other going down on Panel 3!!!
Panel 4 works nicely though I suggest including minimal colour tinting would add dimension and visual appeal The font for the graphics maybe a little large.
Keep up your very promising planning.